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Columbus was Wrong

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Model : Mandie

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Columbus was wrong,
I dropped straight off the edge

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olive prances about in her field of gold,
never knowing to do what she's told,
as the moments of her life unfold,
she's hopelessly free.

while pinto flies above, her wings on the breeze,
searching for a ground dweller to mock & to tease
while she herself, is shaking at the knees,
she's bound to continue.

olive never stops to take a break,
the silvern blades shiver and quake
beneath her ankles of give and take,
she's relentless.

still undeniably dizzy with flight,
pinto's eyes embrace the warm light,
and she finds her loss in the fight.
she's falling.

amidst her wave of absent-minded dance
olive grazes the sky with her hands full of chance
and feels the pulse of the instinctual trance,
she's trying.

pinto sees only the blue backdrop around,
her heartbeat racing with the speed of her sound,
while inside her chest, she's starting to drown,
she's about to be saved.

olive has frozen, glued to the spot,
not knowing why she's suddenly stopped,
just sure thats she's always known, but somehow forgot,
she's ready.

and the splash of color seems too much to bear
while the two souls find themselves colliding with air
and the world appears much too unaware
they've crashed into feeling.


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and for a moment in time, the atmosphere tasted brilliant.
Image size
1728x1728px 1.41 MB
Make
Panasonic
Model
DMC-LS70
Shutter Speed
10/4000 second
Aperture
F/8.0
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Aug 9, 2009, 2:28:16 PM
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kitsuneko-xenon's avatar
Great shot!8i9iok (something fell on my keyboard and wrote the weird part, but I rather liked it). You can jump really high, unless that is a trick of perspective :O Did your feet get wet? Also, did you invent the line "and for a moment in time, the atmosphere tasted brilliant."? Because I really like it :D